Feedback 1
"Tokyo-based" in 0.1
Cybozu, a Tokyo-based global software company.
I think "Tokyo-based" is not important
How about: "Cybozu, a global software company that provides web-based groupware services."
Or, If you intended to show the author is in east-asian culture, "Cybozu, a global software company founded in Japan"
"articulate" in 0.1.2
I was able to translate what I was doing unconsciously into words
I was able to articulate what I was doing unconsciously
The word "articulate" looks a little difficult for non-native
"there is an opposite opinion." in 0.1.2
Sould it be "there are some opposite opinions." ?
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